okay so im makin this story:
Chapter 1
"Come on!" I hear shouting in my ears and some one pressing pain in my arms, head and shoulders. Suddenly, I recognize the voice. I cant believe it, its my dads voice. How could he press pain upon me and shout at me? Then the images of last night come flooding back into my mind. Rape. Rape. Rape. I remember my dad pulling me onto a bed and feeling and touching me all over. I remember him on top of me. I remember worse. Worst of all, I remember it exactly and I remember him getting me drunk saying I shouldn’t remember this over and over again. Now I understood. My own loving father raped me and got me drunk so I wouldn’t remember. Suddenly I just start sobbing. My dad just keeps going and going pulling me into a room. "Not again," I think as he pulls me on the bed and closes the door. I ask,"Where are we?" Suddenly, I realize where we are. My dad works at a hotel, actually he’s the owner and well for the parking lot area there are doors and you open them and there’s desks, papers, stuff like that. The parking lot had the same smell as this room. It smelled dusty and like gas. I knew it was the parking lot. It just had to be. My dad ruffled my hair and started kissing me all over. I was frozen in shock. I couldn’t believe my mom married this b*stard. When I got home I was going to tell everyone. If I even came out alive.
I woke up with the pounding of pain on my head and my eyes as heavy as a elephant. Not that I ever picked up a elephant. My name is Camilla and I am 14. My dad that was raping me is my step-dad. His name is Charles and my mom just got married to him around 2 months ago. He became obsessed about me and then finally last night he took me out here. All of a sudden, tears come to my eyes as I truly realize that Charles probably only married my mother because he wanted me. That son of a b*tch. My mom always minded her own business, just wanted real love, but he had to ruin it all. My real dad Jack, moved away. He didn’t want anything to do with my mother anymore. He loves us and still sees us but for some reason he just doesn’t love my mother anymore. My mother’s name is Laura and she is a kind woman who never meant any harm. She is never harsh and never brutal. I have no older siblings but I do have younger siblings. Stephanie is 11, Bridget is 9, Sean is 5, and Christopher is 2. Plus, the son of a b*tch got my mom knocked up for the sixth f*cking time. I hate him, I hate him, I hate him so much. I look up at the ceiling and see that the wall paper is a ugly plain gray with parts chipping off and that there is no fan. I am so hot that my hair is sticking to my cheeks and sweat is dripping down my forehead. I feel pale and I feel ruined, messed with, used. There is no windows. Just a bed, desk, papers, pens, night stand, computer, and some other useless junk. On the nightstand there is a clock that reads: 6:34 A.M. I look down and see that all my clothes are off and that I’m covered with a blanket. It makes me mad to see that he just leaves me here, abandoned. I wonder why he left, maybe he is after Stephanie or Bridget. I look to see that all my clothes are flung on the ground all spread out. I feel filthy and dehydrated. I stand up and start to put my clothes on. After I’m all done getting dressed, I reach for the doorknob but soon later I find out its locked. It wont open. Oh my gosh, this son of a b*tch is coming back for me and want’s me even more.. I look around in the desk until I see a hammer. I pick it up swiftly and like a karate chopper I hit it at the door. It didn’t budge that much. So with a few more swift movements and a few more hits with the hammer some of the door breaks down. I reach into the damaged hole I made and twist the doorknob. The door opens and I see myself in a parking lot, I knew it! Charles hotel parking lot. I walk toward the exit, stumbling a few times. As I reach the exit, I walk out, and see Charles’s hotel. I run pass it and onto the curb on the street. I recognize this street. Its called Walnut street, I live on Walsh street, which is only about 3-4 blocks over. I start out as a slow jog but soon quicken up my pace. As I reach Walsh street, I start thinking about what I should say to my mom as I knock on the door. I reached my house soon, its at the top of the street. Before I can even knock I realize its already open. I push it open silently and hear faint cry’s. I stop and listen carefully. I hear murmurs so I walk closer and go halfway up the stairs. I hear," No!" No!"and "Listen to me, you are going to do what I say, or you don’t wanna know what will happen." I can hear Charles and I can hear Stephanie crying. I could also hear faint cry’s of Bridget. I walk back downstairs to the kitchen and rummage through all the drawers until I find what I’m looking for, a knife. Then I tiptoe back upstairs. Once I’m upstairs I stop for about a minute and think of my plan. My plan is, Just risk it,
My plan is, Just risk it, barge thru and threaten him with the knife. Hopefully Sean and Chris are up their too because they would get lost like a blink if they already ran away. I silently tip toe up across the hall way and stand side by side against Bridget and Stephanie’s door. I can hear murmurs and muffling. Suddenly I know I can’t just barge open the door and threaten him with the knife. I have to do it unexpectedly. Luckily, the door is slightly open a creak. I creak it open silently more and more until i can see the faces of Stephanie, Bridget, and my mom. They see me and I see glimmers of worries and fear in their eyes. I bring my finger to my lip and silenty mouth, "Shhhhh." They get the cue and stop staring at me so Charles doesn’t see.
"Bridget!" "What did I tell you?"
Bridget responds in a timid voice,"Im sorry, Im sorry."
"Stop saying sorry and take your damn clothes off," Charles says in a harsh voice.
I felt Bridget’s pain as she shyly took off her shirt. I just
just wanted to stab him so badly. I started creeping up slowly behind him then quickening my foot steps as to save Bridget from her embarrassing and painful moment, I knew Charles was planning to rape her, right then and now, but I would stop him.
I kept creeping more and more until I was directly behind me and I could feel his breathing quickening as the excitement rose in him at the site of Bridget’s nudity. What a sick sick sick bastard he was. With no time to waste I rose the knife and quickly I submerged the icy tip of the blade slightly into his freckled rough skin upon his shoulder.
"Don’t move, Charles. This is over. Tell me where Sean and Chris are."
"I dunno", Charles mumbles as fear rose in his shivering voice.
"Yes you do," I shouted.
"Okay, okay
NOW what should happen? like to sean and chris? i was thinkin a guy paid charles for sean and chris and took them for k*ddie p*rn or s*x?
or wut? HELp. plz!
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